Whoa... as i read that, i checked the rhyming, and the words clicked together so well that it was as if... well i can't explain, so this will show my feelings.
*favorite*

I really like this! It's very good! Bravo.

This is an amazing poem. I love the words you use to describe everything and I even love the rhyme scheme. The rhymes do not seemed forced or contrived in any way. The couplet at the end is also very finely crafted and you really manage to bring in the right mechanics of from and structure in this poem. Overall, I really love this poem and great job on crafting such a great piece.