|Reviews for Toxicity|
| Eternal Skies 9/21/09 . chapter 1
it's okay i guess but it needs more details, explanations and things similar. imagery if you'd like. to make the reader 'feel' the poem, cuz i seriously don't know what this is all about.
| Isca 3/7/09 . chapter 1
I like that you said something toxic is 'green.' It made me think of greed and envy. :)
| Plej 3/5/09 . chapter 1
What I liked about this piece: It was funny (The not like Britney bit) and charming, and I can relate to it, with the love I have with some of my family members, like right on point.
ANother What I liked about this peice: It was short, but I think that may be a reason I liked it, cuz it got straight to the point, and it was swet.