James sounds hot.

Woah, so does Brad.
I like Craig, for some odd reason.

Lisa? She seems like a sweetheart.

Poor thing is going to have her heart broken.

Great Chapter.

UDPATE.

loved it[:

love it!
love it!
love it!
update soon :)

love the second chapter, update again im hooked!

i like this so far, update soon :)

good content wise, but i would seriously think about reading it through for grammar and spelling,
happy writing
rosetiger13

Aha...hmm...now this is interesting. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. Update soon. (:

love the story, i am really intrested in seeing where it is going!
keep up the good work and update soon please

Seems like it'll be a good read, I'd say to watch your spelling though, I saw quite a few mistakes i tis chapter. UPDATE SOON! Nicely done.

Keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx