I'm so excited to see all the changes you've made! I'm really interested in their time at the Academy, even if I still really want to know what was going to happen next in the previous version of this story. ;) I'll be patient.

I read the prologue part so far. It was just the right amount of exposition, and it was balanced with just enough character shining through the narration. I really liked the burning prince line.

Okay, I lied; I read a little of the chapter, too, but just up to the first scene break. I'm trying so hard to wait until story time! Your dialogue is snappy and carries the story well, as always. Can't wait to be read the rest, when you have time.