i love the opening line.
it's something very interesting and strange, almost - but it transitions perfectly into traveling and leaving and always being gone.

personally, i don't feel the ending like i felt the beginning - the last two lines have less impact on me, but that's just personal preference, i think, because those two lines seem a very good fit for this poem.

I liked the: "you're always gone and never here,/i reached for you/head lost in a dreamcloud" part.

The third line was a bit odd to me because you were using to to connect the places and then you switched to and. If you meant to as in literally that was the path they would take I still think then would work better than and.

I like "dreamcloud" and "ocean girl" those were nice descriptions. The piece was a nice description of the person though I kind of wanted more. I also really liked the title, it added to the piece.

I would really like to travel to those places in your poem. Nice poem. Please read and review my stuff.

All I can really say is, "Wow."

"Ocean girl." SACRED!

Wow, really great piece! Oddly fitting to my life right now, actually, so I found it very relatable.

I like how you started this off. The first line is a bit strange, and it really catches the reader's attention.

The concept as a whole is great. It can be looked at the obvious way: she is a traveler, and he is always left behind and misses her. Or you can look at it deeper, and go to the general feeling of her never being there for him. I like how it can have this sort of double meaning, especially because it's so short.

Great piece overall. It has a serious, pretty sad subject, but it made me smile for some reason. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it :)

veryveryveryvery good! What I like best is that so much is expressed in so few words. "ocean girl" so creative! keep it up =]

I liked the short simplicity of this piece. It did not seem at all cluttered or unfocused. It achieved the task at hand.

I don't think the title is the best choice, however. I found it somewhat distracting. There must be a better title that would tie your work together more effectively.