Ohh, I like it. Actually love the repetition. It really drives inthe point. And the last few lines were so powerful. Kind of gave me chills. I think I like it more each time I read it. The ending really completes it. Good job!

Hypocrisy and pretending to be happy again. I like the idea. Again great use of contrast and repetition!

Wow. I liked the repetition. And I really liked the idea in it. Nice meaning there. :)

Now THAT sounded nice. Loved the rythm.