Mm, I only just realised that Ive read this before, the last time I read it though I kinda skimmed over the chorus after the first time I read it and that really wrecked the whole effect of it. This time I read it allot slower, paced it, and it was beautiful. The bridge is very beutiful. Keep writing

Great lyrics!

Though I was the tiniest bit distracted by the punctuation and one misspelled word, but I have OCD, so never mind that. I don't know why, but I could sort of hear the song in my mind...

Well, anyways, awesome song lyrics. ;)

:'(

I really liked the bridge, it was heartbreaking but beautiful! Irrelevent comment: I like your profile pic!

I agree with HighOnBrokenWings. The 'permanent leak' idea was genious. It's a bit shorter than a few of your songs, but sharply/cleanly gets the point across. WOOT!

- strobeXlightXstatic

very emotional. it has quite a nice flow to it.

good job

keep writing

The pernament leak thing, that is genious :D Nice work :)

wow. I swear this song.. I love it. Keep up the great work.