wow. so straight forward. I think I like this, really. So frank and the emotion can be observed well. Nice!

Hm, well I do like the overall candid-ness of this piece. The emotion was frank and obvious. Although, I'm not so sure about the writing itself. It just seemed a bit, I don't know...raw but not in the good way. I'm not sure how to explain but it felt like you wanted to say so much more but you just didn't know how so instead you wrote this.