Wow, this poem is so creative and unique. I liked the format, the tone, how relatable it was, everything about it, really. :)

I like the general feel of this poem. It's very very open and friendly - most of the time, poems aren't either of them. To me, it seems as if there's no pattern (so to speak) for the different lines. Are they meant to emphasize anything, or did you press the enter button where you thought it would look/sound best? Regardless, something about that throws me off - it seems as if it's random and without thoughtful pattern. Otherwise, I definitely like this quite a bit! It's so lighthearted and makes me wish things were this way again, like in kindergarten and such.

Aw. thats cute.

aw, quite sweet!

-Allyn