KEY TO YOUR HEART

Hey, hey. I'm bored so I'm reviewing this because I do not have physics tomorrow and I can't be bothered to study for English Extension.

Good use of imagery...though the beginning is somewhat dodgy. Makes you seem like a pervert, "her bra visibly showing..." Iris was only slightly mortified. But besides the use of her name, it's actually quite good.

What did you get for this again? Oh right...the average. Still, it's pretty good. I got 18 for my story. Which is depressing and angsty and apparently I need a better structure/ be more adventurous or something.

And I know I'm ranting but ranting is fun. I'm planning on writing more for my story tomorrow instead of studying and then possibly gaming. Just for fun.

Teehee.

I'm obviously bored and being random as alluded to by my previous comment.

I like your stories. )

Crazily tank images and stuffs, and it's romance ... and features my name. teehee.

I'm sure, you're SO gonna own me for this. Mine was so ... well, just not as good I suppose. (Trying not to harm my own self-esteem too much. XD)