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MaeLikesPoptarts 2009-04-29 . chapter 1
Another awesome piece that I really, really like, haha.

The repetition of the "miles and miles of dust / as far as the eye can see" in the beginning and the end is a good point of focus.

I like the subjects of your poems.
Unique and poignant, and very well written.
Good writing. :]
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