I like how each part could be its own piece. However, the capitalization kinda messes with that a bit. I might just get rid of the capitalization.

"hungry mind I see my"... mind. (the next part is a new sentence)

Also, you have a random asterisk in the middle. Not sure if that's a fp mess up or what.

Anyway, formatting aside, I liked the piece. I especially liked that ending. The whole web thing has been done before, but describing the struggle as bringing truth was a really unique touch.

EVEN CREEPIER! Again, exactly like me and that guy I was telling you about! XD