|Reviews for Yet to Be Crippled|
| Isca 3/3/09 . chapter 1
"But today I'll write it off as detox." Deliciously introspective.
"Fingers crawling south until they’re cradiling the swelling of neonatal impudence." Brilliant diction.
"Tonight I'll wretch." Striking!
| scarletdragongirl 3/2/09 . chapter 1
I like the twist at the end. Because it talks of all these horrible things(which is really well written) then suddenly the poem turns to love like it's the only thing keeping you together. Really good!