"I'm like an abandoned child

wandering 'round your heart without

finding the door to enter again."

i love this.

The first stanza confused me... you want to find the words to the person would know how you felt without words?

"But in the end no matter"... "end it doesn't matter"

"You look as if you don't listen to,"... listen to what? I don't think you need the word to

I really like the second to last stanza. That descriptions was really unique and fitting.

"We shouldn't be here." This line is so sorrowful and intense! :)

"I'm like an abandoned child

windering'round your hear without

finding the door to enter again."

I like those lines.

very sad, but well written.

The other half of "we" is your father?

Very cute and hopeful and happy, I loved it!

I really like it! Nice work!