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t-t-t-ouch. 2009-03-05 . chapter 1
I really really like this, its very straightforward while at the same time remarkably nonchalant, if that makes sense.

The two lines that caught me most off gaurd,
"Ink stains on all my fingers
With paper cuts on my tongue"

Beautiful imagery.

P.s. Thank you very much for the review, I would just message you back but my email is messed up. I've never seen Pheonix, but I would like to. Thank you again.
Isca 2009-03-03 . chapter 1
"You're only able to see what I allow you to see." Powerful message. :)
sosickofposers 2009-03-02 . chapter 1
wow I love it. it has so many meanings i liked the way how you said you were not perfect.
kloun mannequin 2009-03-01 . chapter 1
my favorite part:

My only lifeline
Is the pen I hold now
Bleeding out this obsession
With infectious words

a bit scary but great.
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