Hehe, so...cute...?

I got a bit confused, because one place in the story - and one place only - you use 'I'-form (instead of 3.person)... Was that on purpose? Otherwise, very nice story.
--Ally

Still awkward. Anything beyond "and then they frolicked through the fields in an insanely g-rated fashion" is too adult for me when it's coming from you. I still hear your voice in my head. but thank you. did manders tell you to specifically write this? cos I find that a little hard to believe...anyway, thanks! Muy amor por mi amiga! I think that's how you say it. well, Beaucoup amour pour ma copine. Ma meilleur copine. MMC instead of BFF. Yeah. you know it.