Okay...HOW is this poor woman still alive?!?!?!?

You know, you may just have given me a fear of accepting bunches of flowers from people, no matter who they are! I hope you're happy!

nice story so far really caught my attention.
keep up the good work

silent-anthem

:) This was cool, creepy, but cool.
Creepy is kind of the whole point of reading a Horror story though.

Not bad, but it seems somewhat a little rushed, with the jumpyness of the chapters. Keep going though, I want to see where you take this story.

i love it update soon!

Cool. This story is creepy, but I am supposing that that is the way you meant for it to be. I am definitely enjoying it though. ^^
Please continue.

That black rose disturbs me. Be sure to let me know when you update this, okay?

You're right about the chapter jumping this way and that way, but again, the ending of the chapter had me chilled. I'm almost scared of clicking onto the next chapter.

But if you said the formatting will make sense, then I trust you. ^_^

Well, the description was certainly intense. And I'm sure you're happy to know that I'm freaked out by stalker dude.

One slight gripe. (I'm trying to be constructive) is that you need to proof-read a little more. Like a few typos here and there that a spell check wouldn't pick up. "heal" instead of "heels" etc etc

I'm impressed! Ages since I last read some of your material and when I do, it's to be treated to something that's written as simply as ever. Sometimes people bog down their work with too much description (I'm guilty of that) so it's nice to read something which doesn't make me feel as f I'm studying.

But combine this with your ability to chill people with that last sentence, and you've got me interested.

I...am loving this story! :D More, please?

Ok so far. Jeez your'e as dirty minded as me! I likey!