Wow this blew me away.
Too many beautiful lines for me to say!

This has an audible quality that would lend itself well to song. The sound progression and natural inflections of diction makes the reader hear the words rather than just reading them. Great sound. MD:77.

i completely relate to the last stanza.
you made a really concise, nice contrast

aww i can relate to the last lines. yeah people that i know aren't the best listeners. i especially liked the second last stanza. nice work.

the way you wrote this was amazing i know there are people who can relate to this and this would take the words right out of their mouths

Wow. I can very personally relate to this. Exactly what I want to say. Love it. You wrote it perfectly.