"I stalk the night,

as Her loyal knight."

I like the word play in those lines. :)
Great poem. :)

I really like this! :D.

wicked this is really good!
xoxo :)

I am really in love with the werewolf in this poem. On one hand, I can sympathize with him because frankly speaking, how many people are willing to live as werewolves? On the other hand, I admire his loyalty to the Queen. Hmm, I assume that he is truly loyal. :)

Wow. Nice work! I like the werewolf/knight theme.

Wow that was was cool. i wish i could write like that.:)

DeSlasher

Ohh~ I see this as a great beginning for a fantasy novel!! Great work!
Narq.