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Isca 2009-03-03 . chapter 1
"I'll always doubt, it's safer." This line is mind-blowing and provocative. I love it!

"I pretend that I'm not human, that you don't disarm me." My God...the tone of this line is phenomenal...
Cascalita 2009-03-02 . chapter 1
Beautiful spiderfly. I love the biblical analogies.

"Like those white, open mornings on a day in the year
that is out of one season but not in the next – an in-
between day, a loose-endish day. The sky is dull and
infinite, and you feel like you are going to sit there
forever. Life is better when
taken for granted." - my favourite part, so honest and so true.

Definitely enter this in the competition!

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