V. good :)

This story was too freaking cute! I couldn't stop smiling at the end. I thought she had gone mental at one point in the story and that this was some sort of psychological thriller ha ha , but I loved it! :)

You are a genius. Period.

It's so cute. The way Trevor comes for Sage at the end of the story. Cuteness overload. Think about continuing it.

xoxo,
JustWish

For a second there I was worried she might have a mental disorder which could have been cool, but hey, your story works just fine :p
Im kidding. It was awesome, really sweet and very well written. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Dont drive drunk. Byeee

I think this is my third time reading this. The first time was prob back in 2010. I used to be a lurker. I didn't have an account etc. but this story was just too awesome that i'm "reviewing" it. You're descriptions and words you use to describe the character's emotions really give life to the characters. It's very vivid and realistic. I enjoyed the chemistry between the two main characters and I love how you added the nerd in your story and in this case samuel was a real nerd with the awkward personality and awkward looking face, not some cute nerd who could really be gorgeous underneath the glasses and hair.
This was a fun oneshot. It's light and has a happy ending; all that jazz. I'll prob read it again a year later or something when i'm craving a good oneshot haha. awesome fluff and pretty good considering you wrote it during a brain fart.

Dude, I just love this story. No matter how many times i read it, it never gets old and it always feels like I'm reading it for the first time. It's hilarious, sweet, and makes me go awwwww. Plus the chemistry and dialogue between the characters are real and flow very smoothly. And I love how you describe Samuel mathersons acne prone face as a bacterial wasteland lololollol. I wish you'd continue to write because you write amazing oneshots but I know you have a life and must be a busy person so I'll be content with "Thor" :)))))

.this story is seems like something that would happen to i wish it was a story and not a one

Oh my god! That was so freaking cute and funny! So unique! Love it! Eek!

...Haha! Awwn! This is sooo cute! And really funny! XD

This makes me want to believe that there is a chance in finding the right guy... One day. So just wanted to say thanks for making such a wonderful story.

I really like this story because it's well written with very minor grammatical errors. Also, the story is very descriptive with nice use of imagery. I can totally imagine samuel's acne covered face that puckers his lips and scrunched his nose when he frowns LOL. This is my third time reading this story. I was feeling nostalgic so I had this ficpress moment where u was reading past one shots and this is my favorite :)

I enjoy reading your fluffs haha.

Aw that was pretty good :)

Well, fluff is a good answer to anything! ;D For a minute, I had to stop myself in the middle and wonder if it was all real or not. I had to check back at the genre of this one-shot too, just in case. XD But I didn't really expect what happened to happen! It was a really nice surprise though. It was interesting too, how this was inspired by something that (somewhat) happened to you in real-life. Lots of inspiration to be found in the real world. :D

Very sweet one-shot. :D I hope you continue to write more in the future! Your writing is awesome!

Aww... Now I just feel like laughing after realizing how many people actually said this when they started the review!

But seriously, what a great fic! It's hard finding these little gems in here in FP, you know? Stories that are original in a sense? I've said it already too, but great job!