i liked it. I thought that it was really well written. you have a way of weaving details into your story without them being boring or random. In fact, they're interesting. I also liked your charactor's perspective. He's so negitive and bitter, which totally fits his life because he has hemophilia (you misspelled hemophilia by the way).
I had the feeling that this was early 1900s-ish times, and you said you wanted ideas. Okay, so when I think of early 1900s-ish times and hemophilia, I think of the Romanov kid (what was his name? Alexis or something?). So I thought, whoa maybe this guy is actually that guy! I don't know, it could make for an interesting story.
Any way it goes, I would love to read more!

the beginning paragraphs are done very nicely - i like the repetition of "paris is a city of". you summed up paris in a blunt, yet poetic way that suits paris very well. i also like the mystery in this and the way he talks to her. it's so eerie, yet friendly that it's both unnerving and calming. i like this a lot.

This was rather spooky. You seem to have a very good beginning, and I would be glad to see you continue this. :)

I really liked your attention to detail. That really helped set the mood for the story and helped me to form a mental picture of what was happening.

What I disliked was that sometimes the present tense words felt awkward, although that may be just because that I usually don't read stories that are written as if they are currently happening.

Good job!

I really liked this. It had a creepy feel to it and I am curious to know what the main character is afflicted by. I thought you could have expanded more on detail because I wish I knew what he looked like, what Georges looked like and the girl looked like. I know you spoke of blonde hair, but there is more to looks than someone's hair ;-) Great job otherwise. The only thing is- is this supposed to be a one-shot or multi chaptered? I am having a hard time telling if you are going to update it or not...

Huh. I definitely liked it, but I'm not sure if I completely understood it. xP