o_o
wow. i loved this. a lot.
:)

Okaay...

Okay.

That was weird, different. Great, yes, but weird. I dunno. I'm not too into the whole fairy tale and then hardcore sex and then back to fairy tale switch. It just spins my head, ya know?

But this was great and hot and AMAZING. Yeah.

I loved this story so much. It had a sort of magical theme and yet in a more futuristic. When you think of magic, you immediately transfer your mind to medieval story like Camelot with Merlin and Prince Arthur. The sword in the stone and the whole deal, haha. So when you read a story that is sent in a more futuristic time and yet a magical under-current to it it's rare, because it's not something that mixes well a lot. It's usual to have the old evil hag...well, actually you did. Madam Lucia. But I loved everything about this story. Maybe a bit sad that it didn't have a bigger problematic issue, or maybe more detail about the months that Miu never heard from Rajan. Despite myself I liked the happy ending, and it was a very poetic closing line. I wouldn't call the story cliche. It's unique in it's own way and you made a story-theme tale yours. I loved the story, basically.

I pictured Miu as a bird and Rajan as a cat.

No joke. I don't joke about that.

Dig it.

I think it's sweet..^^
Good story..

But wasn't Miu a girl's name?
And Rajan do reminded me of some Bollywood movie.. I almost called Miu as Puja.. Hahaha.. XP

Aw, I like it. I like the ones with happy endings. It's pretty. I like it a lot. They're so very adorable. I think this is the best out of the stories I've read for this challenge - better than mine, at the very least. I like it :)