|Reviews for The Story You Shouldn't Know|
| Lord of the Weird 3/6/09 . chapter 2
Its taken me a long time getting around to read this. i must say that Josh's heritage did not surprise me a all. Very good bingo, very good
| Unforgettable-PoeticDreamer 3/5/09 . chapter 5
Very good. I can't wait for the next chapter and aI look forward to you updating soon. I think the relationship Josh and Ana have is very interesting and I look forward to reading more about the secrets of their lives. You are a very good writer and you're very talented when it comes to illustrating a story. Nice work, again, I can't wait to read more.
| Unforgettable-PoeticDreamer 3/5/09 . chapter 4
I am inwardly laughing at this point. I don't mean to make fun of death or anything, but Josh's reactions to the incident and his enthusiam about torture is very amusing. I especially like his arrogance, makes him to be a very interesting character.
Again, a very nice chapter.
I look forward to reading more!
| Unforgettable-PoeticDreamer 3/5/09 . chapter 3
Another good chapter. I won't take too much time writing this review but...I was right! _ Half angel, a very interesting concept. I'm in school...again, so I'm going to try and finish up what you have before my next class.
I really like this story.
| wolfen princess 3/3/09 . chapter 5
'Anna wasn’t perfect. Because perfection doesn’t weaken, and Anna had already begun to.'
That is a great line. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
This is a great twist on the whole good vs evil, angel vs demon/satan/devil thing. I'm curious as to how their relationship is going to play out, and what Josh's curse is.
Umm, like I said before, it's still a little fast. There's a lot of info in each chapter, but it's addicting. Please continue!
| i lazy 3/3/09 . chapter 5
hm... josh nice. :D I already knew he was the son of satan, something just gave it away. But it was an awesome way to say it. Didn't guess Anna's heritage though. _
Now you better update, or I'll send the other four sons of satan after ya! _
| wolfen princess 3/3/09 . chapter 2
Okay, here are my three comments:
1) I love the story, though I do think it's a little fast, but that's pretty minor.
2) i actually thought Josh was Satan or some half demon, nice little twist there.
3) I want to say a female Jesus person or angel, juging by what Josh is, but honsetly, no idea...
This is a great story, and I will definetly keep writing.
| Unforgettable-PoeticDreamer 3/3/09 . chapter 2
This story promises to be very, very interesting.
As for your questions:
-Comments: You illustrate a story very well.
-So far: I really like the story
-Heritage: Yeah, I kinda saw it coming. I suspected it with the chapter title,the 'greater evil' comment, and the sly 'hell' references - a nice addition I must say.
-Anna is: I'm stil on the fence about Anna. I want to say that she's an angel because of some of the things you've said about dropped from the sky, how perfect she is, her power, and her want for good...but I guess I'll just have to jeep reading to find out!
Well, again, nice work with this. I'm in school reading this so thank you for writing such an interesting stry, I'll probably be thing about this the better half of the day. I think I have time fore one more chapter before my free period is up. Again, nice work with this!
| C. M. Levy 3/3/09 . chapter 5
Bahahaha, Satan is a control freak. Their niceness seemed a bit too easy, though. I mean, romance is good and it makes me giddy and all, but still, you need to watch out for it. I do it all the time :( I am awful at making love interests hate each other haha.
Anyway, liking this, adding it to my favs.
| C. M. Levy 3/3/09 . chapter 4
| C. M. Levy 3/3/09 . chapter 2
Haha the hints were good, pretty easy give away I think after what you wrote about the dogs howling.
I want a wolf :(
| Unforgettable-PoeticDreamer 3/3/09 . chapter 1
I find this story brilliant thus far! Although we haven't really recieved much for the plot, I look forward to reading more of this and seeing what's going on with the School for the Unusually Gifted. I like the aspect of their powers and I could really see the scene play out as I read this piece. Again nice work with this. I doubt that I'll be able to read all five of the chapters that you've posted in one setting, but I definetly look forward to reading more. Nice work.
| C. M. Levy 3/3/09 . chapter 1
Hah! Fun start, that poor girl. Must have been intimidating.
Great first chapter! And I will take your word about the romance thing. God knows, I'm in the need of a good romance story :P