cool, I didn't know you updated since I was a bit lost! but hi, I like this a lot, make me think about people who push people to be someone else but them.

the message is clear, sad but true and people just must be who they're.

Very good! I love the sentiment. The way that people always seem so fake has always fascinated me. I really like the line “you’re like a copy machine running out of paper” and also the idea of an actor without a script. Quite innovative. My only suggestion is that the word ‘cannot’ in the line “why cannot you show the world who you want to be?” might work better contracted as ‘can’t.’ It seems to flow better. Other than that, spectacular! You always portray emotions so well.

this would make a lovely song. do you play? this was a great poem after a long wait. i'm happy to hear one of your poems again. it would be a lovely song.

Finally, some new work of yours! And it was definetely worth the waiting, because this is amazing!! I love how you've captured it all into one piece, how fake people can be, and you see through it all. Very, very well done, I'll put it in my fav's!