thats so not the end right?

its good, only thing is you need to do something with it

ive noticed that for the last few chapters its been almost the same

shes depressed andy has a new girl

she cries andy seems to like her then goes back again

at least thats what it seems to me

It really surprised me to see you only had 2 reviews! I like the intensity of emotion in your story. I especially liked chapter 2! Your characters are very lovable and I can't wait to see more of them.

I'll admit, I only read the first chapter because of the title.

The first line of the first chapter was awesome by the way.

The Killers are class, especially their first album.

Nice incorporation, and mean title.

I love it!