 XxShokixX 2009-05-08 . chapter 21hehe booty call ^^
Aw..this chapter was just so cute :)
Update soon please :) |
 XxShokixX 2009-05-04 . chapter 20Hehe Booty Call :P
Aw...Bret's forgiven her :)
I've noticed you update really soon so, go you, you rock! :D
Keep up the brilliant work :) |
 XxShokixX 2009-05-02 . chapter 19Aw...poor Bret, nothing seems to end up right for him, and Beth for that matter too:P
Keep up the good work :) |
 XxShokixX 2009-05-01 . chapter 18No! I wanted to see what Bret's reaction was! :(
But anyway...good chapter :D
Keep up the good work :) |
 Tipsy101 2009-05-01 . chapter 18Another great chapter!
I like the fact that your chapters aren't too long, so they don't hurt my eyes lol.
It was good to know a bit more about Beth's past. |
 XxShokixX 2009-04-25 . chapter 17OMG!
Wow, short but brilliant! :)
Why doesn't jackson really like Beth, it just seems strange that he would hate her...
Anyway, can't wait to see what happens with the whole Adam calling thing :P
Keep up the good work :) |
 XxShokixX 2009-04-24 . chapter 16Poor Beth, I really like her past, however depressing it is, it's also really interest.
I would love if Adam just randomly shows up or something, and then a little fight between him and bret or something...
Anyway, I'm just rambling :P
Keep up the good work and update soon please :D |
 Tipsy101 2009-04-18 . chapter 15It was good to read about Beth's life in London, something I'd never have guessed right. |
 XxShokixX 2009-04-16 . chapter 15Wow, that was long!
Wow, Beth's past is really f'd up! I feel so sorry for her :(
Just glad that its all behind her now.
Keep up the good work! :) |
 britishmangachicklizzie 2009-04-11 . chapter 14Yet another awesome chapter.
There's a lot of spelling and grammar errors, but I've been overlooking them because the story itself is so awesome to read.
So now I know who Adam is. I hate him already. Beth reminds me of myself so much, and to see her get hurt pisses me off! And the way he's shrugging off her desire for answers reminds me of an ex of mine...this chapter hits close to home for me.
I can't wait for the next chapter! |
 XxShokixX 2009-04-10 . chapter 14Yay, I now know what happened to Beth and who Adam was :)
Overall it was a really good chapter though there were a few mistakes that I can't for the life of me remember :S
Keep up the good work :) |
 Tipsy101 2009-04-09 . chapter 13Intriguing :)
I wonder what happened to Beth to make her so upset... |
 britishmangachicklizzie 2009-04-07 . chapter 13Wow!
I've been reading this story from the beginning, but I've been too lazy to review every chapter, for which I apologize.
I love this story.
For one thing, I have a fascination with England. That's probably evident by my name. XD
First of all, Beth's mom sounds a lot like my mom. She obsesses over Jane Austen, too, but not to THAT level. I can sympathize with Beth for that.
Second of all, I love Beth's first encounter with Bret. It reminds me a little of Twilight, but it's better. :) And, Bret is incredibly hot, too...I don't have a thing for Edward Cullen, but every time I read an update to this story, I fall for Bret all over again. I love that he and Beth finally got together, but I must admit I'm a bit jealous.
And Charlotte...damn, talk about bitchy! I'm a flutist, section leader to be exact, and most of the chicks sitting below me are just like her...they're blonde, tan, and hate my guts because 1. I'm a sophomore, they're seniors. 2. I'm not blonde, tan, and I actually put a little effort into my everyday appearance. The one who sits next to me is the biggest whore on the planet, and whenever Charlotte comes into the picture, I picture the uberwhore.
And I love Beth's style, too...effortless, yet cute. I like what she wore to the party where Owen came on to her. I wore something similar for 80s day during spirit week at school, and I got D-Hall for dress code violation. I'd worn a long t-shirt, leggings, and a big belt around my waist, yet I got in trouble for not wearing pants. But I did have on shorts underneath...
XD Sorry this was a bit random. I feel like I owe you a long review as I haven't reviewed the last 12 chapters. I can't wait to find out what happens next! I can only imagine what happened in Beth's past that disturbs her so badly. |
 XxShokixX 2009-04-07 . chapter 13I'm so confused! What happened to Beth? Who's Adam? And most importantly, what the hell is going on?
I liked this chapter though, it was full of suspense :)
Update soon please! :) |
 XxShokixX 2009-04-05 . chapter 12Yay, an update :)
I really don't like Charlotte, she is a total B-I-T-C-H! :)
Keep up the good work ;) |
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