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| Chasing Skylines 3/3/09 . chapter 1
Lecture me later for even thinking of questioning your grammar... but shouldn't there not be an apostrophe, seeing as you're intending for tees plural and not possessive?
[I'd never noticed just how deep a brown they were before then.]
Luckily since this is a one-shot with limited backstory, there's not much need to criticize sudden manifestations of lovey-dovey feelings. Still, it was rather short and no definite memory of their characterization sticks.
Wasn't that sudden? But the fluffy romance demands it, dammit! XD
My lawyer will be sending my dental bills to you shortly.
Haha, while fluffy, it wasn't bad. Good job.
Good luck in WCC.