Okay.. I swear, I just got the email for the story, hadn't clicked on it, and then when I logged in to review, it said I already had! If someone hacked my account... please tell me that I already reviewed!! Anyways, great chapter! Finally, some conflict comes!!

^_^ Yay!
I love Gabriel. He's so protective, not to mention secretive! It would be very frustrating... leaving all of those cryptic comments. God. Ah!

*hugs*
Anita.

I don't just read any story. Any story that I choose to read has to have potential which is why I am reading yours. I do not mind if the up dates are few and far between but this is one of maybe 10 stories of the thousands on fiction press that I actually enjoy. So do what you can, I totally understand the Senior year thing, I went through it last year. School is important and I'm sure all of your fans will be willing to come back to you when you can up date again. So don't give up on this story, it's a good one and I hope to see more chapter in the future!

~FireRam

yay

you should!
Gabriel and Marisa are like, a part of my life now.
the true fans won't care how long you take. :]

Please continue!

No you can't stop writing, I long to finish this story!

Great chap!

AW Gabe is so freaking sweet! =D

I think it was for the better that her parents didn't want her, even though it obviously hurt, but she ended up with a good family ;)

yay chapter!!

:) Yay!
You're back. And it's awesome. Thanks for uploading, I'll look forward to reading more. ^^

you must update as soon as possible !! lol i love ur story, cant help but have a bit of a soft spot for Gabe lol. keep up the great writting!

Great chapter! Shorter, yes, but still good! I'm having a blank right now, so I'll just stick with good(gah, I can't spell! I'm so glad delete keys exist)

aw, -blush-
thanks for the dedication!
i'll miss your chapters till august! (good timing, cuz i won't be here from the 5th to the 17th :P)
you KNOW i LOVE this(:

Very good chapter, and it won't let me put that I was too lazy to log in! Bleh.. oh well, I liked this chapter, though I am a little confused at why there was a fight and such... Update soon.

=( Me no likey Hitauses lol

Good chapter, short but sweet!

I am loving Gabriel more and more.

Erica..Idk yet she seems cool but I haven't see enough of her to make a good...assesment ;)