| Reviews for Gaming |
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NocturnalNerd 11/26/09 . chapter 1This wasn't what I expected from the title, but I like it. Especially the second stanza, and how it ends, "and get fooled by love". A good line. "Salty like everything" doesn't make sense, since not everything is salty. This kind of reminds me of a thing between an old friend and I. I only seemed to like him when he hated me, and vice-versa. |
simpleplan13 3/8/09 . chapter 1"Let's pretend we're fool,"... either foolish, fooled or fools In the third stanza, I thought the last two lines were quite too repetitive. I might gget rid of the last line. I like this piece. The tone works really well and your descriptions are interesting. I especially love the whole gaming thing. |
Isca 3/7/09 . chapter 1I liked the first stanza the best; it was striking and flowed well. |
lael1bologna 3/4/09 . chapter 1Mhm, Nice. |
Lilja Ruusu 3/4/09 . chapter 1I like the verse 1, bad words crack me up! hehe |
Erlkoenigin 3/4/09 . chapter 1I don’t quite share your view-point, but it is a great poem |