Still incredibly cutesy, you're great at that.

Also, your characters are great and they all have these great names.

Winning the lottery sounds like funn.

Aw, this was really cute, I liked it a lot! I love how your stories are all distinctly unique-it's refreshing. :)

In terms of your writing, I continuously spot sentences that are confusing or irrelivant to the story itself. Try to concentrate on keeping the writing solid. No offense or anything. Like I said, I adore your stories! :D

Very cute. :)

Oh. So cute ;)

It's nice how he remembers the good thing she did for him. Very nice! I like it! Good work.

Loved it...your stories are always a delight to read.

sweet :]

absolutely adorable and very well written ]

loved it

aw this was so cute! )

Very cute! I liked it a lot. Nicely done.

I'm really enjoying the "Bus" series! Can't wait for more installments!

More!

Meri Jaan? I like it! ?(I'm Indian XD)

Still unrealistic, a bit, but more realistic than Backseat Confessions. I liked this better, to tell the truth, though the last line (about them getting married) wasn't exactly necessary. This was very cute and light, and there was just a nice quality about it that I really liked. (: I'm very glad woodstock1969 added this to our c2. (:

It's lehenga, not lengha. LOL :).

Nice oneshot, anyway!

Aww its so cute! And sweet :)

-Keep writing and inspiring-

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