This is gorgeous! I cannot begin to describe how much I love it. You have such talent!

This is absolutely beautiful, I really admire you for being able to rhyme without sounding cliche.

"Like nightingales on fire." The imagery here completely floored me. Poor burning ones. Brilliant line. :)

It flows and rhymes so well!
-Isca

I cannot discribe how much this is so amazing. So I won't even try, flat out: It's A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!

Wow...this was a really great poem! It was pefectly composed in both rhythm and rhyme. Great job!