Hey.
This was really cool.
The ending was pretty sad though, and maybe it would've been better if it had've been broken up into chapters.
But it was brilliant none the less.

Aww that was so good! I liked this story it was so interesting and emotional! lol I've really liked your past couple of stories that you've posted-can't wait to read more! :)

i both hated and loved this (the love outweighing the hate of course) it was just too sad of an ending. throughout the whole thing i kinda got the feeling Ashley was using her but i really didn't wanna believe it, so when we find out she did, it just aggravated me. so this was really interesting, and really well written, but the inner romantic in me is crying. great job tho