this was actually a very, very good read.

"She says she's sorry over and over, he forgives her because he still loves her and she cries harder, but she doesn't think he knows why she's apologizing. Sorry, I'm sorry I love him, and I want to love you, but I can't, and I'm sorry.

It's over."

this was my favourite part. because it basically spells out how impossible love is and how no, you can't really choose who you love. you can't make yourself love someone for their sake, because then it's just not real and it's just not right.

i think she still does love him. just differently. not in a romantic way anymore, in more of a friendly way. because she's so concerned about trying to make him happy and satisfied with their relationship. i don't know. i'm just thinking now, haha. :)

either way, i adored this. i love the emotion that you put into it. it was just.. i loved it.

:)

I really like the emotions you've portrayed in this piece.
Simple, believable, bittersweet.
I love it.
=)

Great piece, yeah, great work :D