Hi!

A wonderful chapter. I loved the gorgon especially, as well as the power display.

I totally understand about the time issue - it is the same with my stories. Don't worry about not having anyone read your fic - I'll always read it!

Maddy

Hi!
I really love this story, it is great! I like how there is a fair parliment in the underworld, but poor hades!
I also love the arrow that makes you fall in love with your soul mate. Eros can hit me with that any day!
Keep writing!
Maddy

HAHAHA i love the ice cream scene!! absolutely hilarious! and the "five hours" reaction was terrific. btw, i love love LOVE Diary of Jane!!

For Charon, I couldn't decipher between Gollum or Dobby. :\

But for all the hades/persephone stories I've read, this is probably one of the best starts to them.

Excellent!! Really excellent! I enjoyed it soo much!

Um... is Charon based on Gollum?

Anyway, update soon!

:D

Seriously, that's what I look like right now! I love Greek mythology, and this really adds a sort of modern touch, while still keeping the magic of mythology. Very well done!

the part at the beginning about British Parliament was pretty funny, if a little confusing. Charon is Golem from Lord of the Rings and Dobby from Harry Potter!! and the "master is bringing back a live one? NO LIVING!!" was hilarious! can't wait for the next chapter!

AHAHAHA GO EROS! lol and speaking of Eros, only 5 or 6 inches taller than Persephone?? My boyfriend's a foot and 3 inches taller than me!! I also like the reference to Elysium; way to weave in the totally ignored nice part of the Underworld!

Sweetie, while I appreciate the effort to improve on & spruce up Aphrodite's Plan , but at the same time, I'm tempted to quote Philip Pullman mercilessly to you...

'Sometimes it becomes possible for an author to revisit a story and play with it, not to adapt it to another medium (it's not always a good idea for the original author to do that), nor to revise or "improve" it (tempting though that is, it's too late: you should have done that before it was published, and your business now is with new books, not old ones).'

Just a thought?

Happy writing,
MidNight The Magnificent

I love Greek Mythology to the core. It upsets me when people try to alter my view of Myths. (i.e. Misuses the English/French/Any Language, attempts to add a cliche plot with the only differing factor being that they are Gods, attempting to bring in OCs to swindle the Gods, etc.)

Mini rant aside, I believe you did a rather good job at this. I liked the characterization of Eros - it was marvelous. With a bit of unneeded criticism, I think that Demeter was a tad too overprotective.

But that's just me. Overall, I enjoy the quality of your writing.

i think the rewrite was a good thing becuse know i can read again > you should like make a aprodites plan 2 or another sequel to it you can put the menthe problem oe hades and persephone having kids or something bu it just a idea you have to do it but i think your get a lot of reviews on it! hope you update soon!

i love this chapter! i read all od aphrodites plan and i loved it so i know i will love this just as much ! hope you review soon!