I'm not gonna lie this chapter made me confused and I'm wondering who he/she could be if they are a child of Zeus and her i wonder who her is...I'm really intrigued i really can't wait for the next chapter.

Please update soon, because i'm really enjoying this story. Interested to find out who the new character is...

Great job, Maddy. i like the way the story is going, even if i dont quite know where that is yet. who is that godling? that was all very vague, and i am curious. i hope you keep writing, you are very good at it!
-Eszabela
P.S. i will be changing my username soon. i am changing it to A*S*Love

i love the way the story is going and I'm look forward to the next chapter. I hope you're going to write it quickly. :D I have a suspicion about who the three men are. Hope I'm right...

hmm this has become quite interesting can't wait to see where you take it

wow, Maddy! i didn't know you would write another chapter, let alone two! i love them. Actually, they make sense to me!
keep writing!
-Eszabela

This is a very nice story
I was reluctant to read it in the beginning cuz i thought you would make it about Rhianna the singer, but now that ive read it, i believe this is brilliant

truly it wasn't as rushed as you think it was rather well played out. answered more questions then created. although i wonder why adon would poison her makes me wonder what you have planned for the next chapter. keep writing. truly if it takes a month to write a chapter then its well worth the wait.

Oh ma Gosh! Epic! The suspense!! It's killing Me! Hurry, Hurry!! Don't keep us waiting to long! I mean it's getting really good!! Oh ma Gosh!

KC

Oh no! Poor Lyn!! She'll be heart broken! :(

KC

great story keep it up hope to see more soon

wow! this is amazing. all of it! it is just my kind of book. please update it soon!
-eszabela

As always, an excellent chapter. I liked the whole maze and looking for her heart thing. Were all those other people the people that Empusa had killed, or other Empusa's?

Waiting with baited breath for the next chapter :)

that wasn't all that confusing it was rather good. It was a rather interesting side of the story with the inner mind traveling. umm the thing about changing your writing style adds to the story it gives it flavor.

Dialogue in this chapter is awesome. Posiedon really sounds like a parent! It's great!

(I'm really not obsessed with dialogue or anything, I swear! I don't know why I notice it so much!)