|Reviews for Screaming Barefeet|
| ZombieMcQueen 3/5/09 . chapter 1
this...this, is fantastic.
yet another piece of proof regarding your exellence for poetry.
why is it you haven't gotten published yet?
| Generation Dead 3/5/09 . chapter 1
I really loved this.
It sort of reminds me of a Pheonix, because of the verse about ashes and the last line 'she burned and started again'.
This was very powerful. My favorite line was:
"and the angel it told her,
to watch for thorns because they would hurt,
but all the venom from the stings had made her numb"
Very good job