|Reviews for equal|
| Alice Sleeps 4/8/09 . chapter 1
This is short, but it packs a lot of punch in nine lines. The allusion to fealty and queens is nice, as is the detail of knees bleeding onto gravel. However, the rhyming does seem forced; the words/emphases don't really match up. And may I ask why there is an utter lack of capitalization? Out of curiosity, only.
| Aquafied 3/7/09 . chapter 1
| gnomic 3/4/09 . chapter 1
Love between equals, triumphant? Well, I appreciate the metaphor, and this is definitely well executed... I love the medium, even though I don't agree with the message. Keep on!