The imagery of this poem is really vivid. "onion hearts" really caught me.

I do wonder about the lone capitalized My though.

But wonderfully done once again.

the last verse is so powerful, I was damn close to going "aw" out loud. no lie

Very nice. I would suggest capitalizing on the beginning of each line. But if thats your style, go ahead, stick to it :) Who am I to tell you to change? Nice work all the same