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R. Douglas 3/7/09 . chapter 1This was the first poem I read. D Anyways, the natural rhythm is wonderful and the repetition in the first stanza is really nice. Past the actually mechanics, it's just an amazing poem. Well done. |
ZombieMcQueen 3/5/09 . chapter 1very nice. I liked the different textual variations on cold a lot :) |
Musetta's Waltz 3/5/09 . chapter 1There's a loveliness in this poem that I can't quite put my finger on. The first stanza makes its impression as a whole, no line in it is that significant but taken together it is impressive. The thrice repeated cold is terrific. I think of stars which are brilliant ice and fire. And your last word - perfect. I see a dark green field under a deep sky, waving with tall grass and the promise of rain in the air. |
ForeverBehindTheImpression 3/5/09 . chapter 1I love the first verse. Your style of writing is lovely :) |