This was the first poem I read. =D

Anyways, the natural rhythm is wonderful and the repetition in the first stanza is really nice.

Past the actually mechanics, it's just an amazing poem. Well done.

very nice. I liked the different textual variations on cold a lot :)

There's a loveliness in this poem that I can't quite put my finger on. The first stanza makes its impression as a whole, no line in it is that significant but taken together it is impressive.

The thrice repeated cold is terrific. I think of stars which are brilliant ice and fire.

And your last word - perfect.

I see a dark green field under a deep sky, waving with tall grass and the promise of rain in the air.

I love the first verse. Your style of writing is lovely :)