A mother? A lover? A comfort? Pinned down in six lines and 13 words. Excellent job.

awe, sweet.

*sigh*smile*

Really nice tempo. This kind of reminds me of a book I'm about to finish (True Evil) and could apply to so many instances, and walks of life. I love how you are able to write and tag into words very human instances that are very real to many people.

A.

humans are fragile.

+away from the bounds of society.

Truly amazing, loving the simple-ness, and completely connecting, and seeing a tiny, faded, general, blurred glimpse of the author behind the lines, stanza's and words. What truly good poetry should hold.
A.

So sad but true!
"If one day she woke up and actually did something the world wouldn't care"
:P love that stanza, it is amazing-and like I said so VERY, VERY true.

It kind of raps up the last poem. I'm really liking these.

To me it seems very quickly paced, and I like what it is trying to say. Nice job.

Sweet.
Short.
Amazing.
Awesome.
GREAT!
oh-and deep.