|Reviews for Second Life|
| eenitsedStarzz 5/18/12 . chapter 4
The anticipation is killing me! I want to know what secrets David is hiding, maybe she died and he did some weird scientist voodoo, or maybe he's the reason she's in the coma...there are endless possibilities! Keep up the awesome work! The plot flows nicely and there are minimal/no errors. Also, you have a great plot with the coma being involved for a suspense story because the more realistic the concept, the scarier it is.