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Reviews For: Straight line
jack0of0spades 2009-03-06 . chapter 1
Interesting, for some reason the way you say it makes me think of not only a descriptive moment, but also of the feeling of being ** and observing a beautiful and oblivious straight girl. maybe it's just because you put the word in the title...
EugeneSapphire 2009-03-05 . chapter 1
this is straight and forward. i get the point and i like the way its put. Good job, Keep up the good work. :) Please take time and review any of my stuff you like.

~E. Sapphire
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