wow! i love this!^^ i love sci fci stuff it's da best! the story line looks reali gd keep it up!^^

Haha I love your reference of explaining the color blue to a blind person. It would be difficult, but not altogether impossible.

About your story then...
It's good, keep going. Maybe explain that the alien is telepathic or however she knows what's he is thinking.

Well written. Sometimes, things are meant to be... i love that line :) and the blue thing. Write more so that I can understand it :)

heya guess who!^^ love da improvements ahh typin in da dark is hard anyway going well keep it up ^^