That was SO cute! i loved the cat narrator, absalutely adorable. He makes a great main character. His attitude and actions match him perfectly. A great fic, a definate must read. You HAVE to make a SEQUEL! PLEASE!

Oh i'm thinking of making a cat story as well, but I want the cats to call us something besides human. I was wondering if you would give me permision to use one of your made up names with appointed credit of course. Like: "no-tail",
"up-rightwalker", "rough-hands" or "little-fur"

o my gosh y did u the kitten leav the hous??

Haha this was actually pretty good. If you continue it though, I want it to be happier. Like, all the kittens are returned because they had Parvovirus, and they all die a slow and painful death from the inside out.
Happy that way, y'know? :D :D :D

Hey, very creative and epic in its own sort of way, sort of a different pov for animal pieces, very personal... I couldnt see a kitten thinking differently, which means solid writing has been accomplished. Eh Oh!

Very good so far! I like the nicknames for the humans, its very creative, please continue it