I hope you continue; this is a really entertaining story! I like the characters and their interweaving secrets and motivations.

Livi

nice update

nice chapter. pleas tell me someone is going to kill that bitch that stole the kid. and yay that Adrian is going to kill Gregor.

Oh good, I was just about to delete it from my Alerts list! Glad to see that Adrian is revealed as Aidan, too. Hope Gregor doesn't hurt Nathan too much... or if he does, that he dies a horrible, painful death...
Just one little thing: "walked into the hallway passed Gregor." should be "past"

The boy looked absolutely pathetic. And terribly adorable. (hahahaha!)

OH So now most of the characters meet up. Interesting. Aidan isnt as bad as he sounds. In fact, he is nice.
AW ”Are you their father, now?” TOO CUTE


Nathan shook his head with a slight smile. Every time the boy smiled, Morgan’s heart seemed to pound against his chest.

This isn’t good, Morgan thought.
(oh la la, arent they adorable!)

OH Nathan saw that... he saw that~

so Aidan is a prince... and ran off with a noble? *evil smirk*

Adam is so evil. Poor servant lady and cook. Arg, who did he think he is to separate the couple! King or not, it is no!

I got a little bit lost... so Adrian is attracted to Kyle who is attracted to the boss? (that is what I came to concluded... wonder if I am on the right path)

Poor Nathan, *my Craine from A Tale of Woe* sympathized with you. Well at least you have 2 rommates who want to escape.

Nice chappie

Nathan had the misfortune of having soap rammed down his throat after mimicking her. (AW SO CUTE)

Aw he is afraid of entering the woods alone?... well I will be freaking out. Woods alone = horror stuff popping out.

Also, you mean 'arrow'? "he found the bow." >_<

oh noes! He got... he... gasp! remind me of my A Tale of Woe (arhg that story makes me cry when I first thought of it... =_=... pretty creepy and lame.)

This reminds me also of Joseph and his 11 brothers. >_< ... you know from the Bible. I will continue tomorrow. It is getting late. Nice build up! I wonder who is Kyle and Co.

I love it! can't wait to see how things turn out with Nathan now that the 'deal' has been made...

This is a good story, cant wait to read the next chapters.

poor nathan T_T

Neat to have that message from his mother! And that explains why he's a seer.
I'm also intrigued now in Kyle's past... was he also abused by a brother? Hm... (Interesting to see that he's older than Adrian!)
So, Morgan finally had his way with Nathan... but will he even remember doing it? If he does, and regains his mind, he'll be tortured by it...
Poor Nathan... after a while he might start thinking that somehow, he deserves this kind of treatment. Hope Adrian comes to his rescue soon!
Keep up the good work!!

Glad you cut straight to the chase and let Kyle find Mathew! But what a horrible fate for Beth!! I suppose Clia promised Morgan that he could have Nathan to himself if only he took him away from Adrian... Hope Morgan doesn't get himself killed...

Okay, I'm being nitpicky again:

Killed one of men, too. (missing word)
Why was here? (missing word)
"What's 'more than this?'" = "What's 'more than this'?"
an empty windowless room = an empty, windowless room

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

AUGH! Danger, Will Robinson! (translation: Great cliff-hanger!)
Poor Morgan, first he gets rejected by Nathan, then he gets caught by the wicked Clia! But I wonder why Adrian is so upset about trying to kidnap his own brother? I guess we'll have to wait and see!
Kyle is becoming even more likeable, considering he's giving Celeste the chance to be with Michael more.
Okay, the detail stuff:
Since Adrian’s arrival, he... = Since Adrian had returned, he... is better, I think.
alright = should be all right, but nobody cares anymore...
quickly kissed him softly = limit one "-ly" in a phrase!
just struck gold; = just struck gold,
And that's it! I look forward to seeing what happens when everyone comes to Norta!

Oh, very good! I'm glad that you've started to explain more of their pasts, and what's happening with Nathan! Also an interesting plot twist with Jason and Adrian -- that man will sleep with anything he can get his hands on! LOL I'm looking forward to more slashy goodness in the future.
Okay, a couple minor things:
I'm not sure "space out" is a phrase used in a time/place with no space travel...
The taller man pulled... you're missing a word in the paragraph after that.
nearby tree a he studied => nearby tree as he studied
That's it! Keep up the good work!!

your amazing
i love you ;)

i like your writing style
its a good fast
and i cant wait for more =D