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A Little Lady 2009-05-12 . chapter 1
How old are they in this and Illusoire?
Evenstar1389 2009-05-05 . chapter 1
LOL this certainly answers one of my questions. (had to check back to illusionaire for the surname... and ended up re-reading). I didnt know there was this sub-story hanging around.. guess i should just read everything haha
Heather 2009-05-03 . chapter 1
"Riven’s tall form stretched with the fluidity of a snake and bulk would have been out of place."

do you mean Riven's tall form was stretched? Am I losing my grasp on the English language? (this is very possible- too much time doing French).

Riven and Siobhan's story, I think, would make an amazing romance. Will Kai and Teagan's story echo theirs? (In some ways-- although Siobhan is a 'proper' witch, so maybe not).
Lady Silverhawk 2009-05-03 . chapter 1
Oh my...how very, very intriguing. :) I can't wait to see what happens now. :D
ClariceBA 2009-04-26 . chapter 1
This is a nice oneshot. It's a beautiful snippet of their relationship and although you say you will not answer how it relates to Illusoire, it's fairly obvious. I agree with others that it would have been nice to have this information be a surprise in Illusoire, but usually the reader knows more than the characters do anyway, so it's not a big deal. Hopefully we will get to see both Riven and Siobhan soon in Illusoire...
cbprice25 2009-04-25 . chapter 1
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bananasaurus 2009-04-25 . chapter 1
So Colin is Teagan's half-brother? Intresting..
I can't help but feel that this may have given too much insight into the plot of Illusoire, but I enjoyed it all the same.
Although, you said that Teagan inherited her mother's hair, yet they are different colours??
Anyway, immensely enjoyable, as always :)
bellusss 2009-04-16 . chapter 1
Is Teagan a hybrid?
love this story!
Noisy 2009-04-10 . chapter 1
This makes me want to know more about Talia. Riven seems so sexy. Siobhan seems like a conniver. I like it. (:
... 2009-04-10 . chapter 1
O
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Teagen's Riven's kid isn't she?

WOW - I skipped through most of Illusoire just now, but I'm thinking I'll go back and check this out.
But wait. Then her and Colin can't get together...or can they?
terrorofthehighway 2009-03-29 . chapter 1
Sorry to spam, but I just realised that if Siobhan's hair is platinum, how is Teagan's auburn if she's inherited her mother's hair?
50percentjuice 2009-03-20 . chapter 1
!!

Siobhan's bad. :D I like it
Sorrow's Smile 2009-03-20 . chapter 1
um...its good but, confusing much?
i'vebeencleansed. 2009-03-16 . chapter 1
So what are the chances that this would become a full-fledged story?
:D

An accompaniment of sorts to Illusiore?
Pretty please?

It was excellent. So much mystery! And left me completely unsatisfied, by the way. Haha.
heavengurl899 2009-03-11 . chapter 1
haha so Colin and Tea are half siblings? I know you won't answer...it's just me musing :D
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