This is a very interesting poem. I have to say, I like it. And i don't say that lightly.

Being an avid fan of writing and reading freestyle, I find this easy to appreciate.

My only word of advice would be to take out the period after destruction. It will make the end have more impact, believe it or not, than if there were punctuation.

Wow. This is written really well, and the way you did it has a real impact. I like how it's done in so few words and with short lines. It's really good! :)