NO~ (disbelieved tone) Stephen did not just go free parade around his hotel room~! LOL Darn lucky maid.

“It doesn’t matter, that person no longer exists in our family.” A woman retorted. (This is so sad... well the way you phrased it makes it so... touching... sniff)

“She isn’t some woman. When I return to New York I want to be able to hold her. She is the one I want to settle down with. Hopefully have children of our own.” (Well at least Mimi has value... in Stephy boy's eyes)

Very interesting chapter. So many things happening! *gasp!* Nice.

This computer doesn't allow me to sign in. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I'm sorry for reviewing late and I'll get to your other story soon . I really like how you added depth to the story here. I was really absorbed into this chapter with everything that you had falling into play.

It's definitely getting interesting and I can't wait until you update next!

Good luck with your next chapter.

The beginning is good in the way that you get straight into it absorbing the reader so they want to know more. I think you need to work on the dialogue. When i finished i wanted to know why he had left her...however i do feel you've givent too much away at the beginning...unless your going for a twist later on. Anyway i thought it was pretty good...hope this helps any.

Oh Stephen, you shouldn't do that when you have dearest Mimi waiting. And lol to Akuma. What a bad demon you are!

Poor Mimi, she is getting attacked by that Victor perv!
Don;t worry Mimi, it is self-defense. Throw me the vase on the face if you have to.

Poor Rosa. She got killed... sniff.
Cool chapter

Interesting start. So Stephen isnt such a bastard. He does love Mimi... just that he is at somewhere listening to depressing music from a juke box. LOL.

I like how you start Stephen off. Interesting.

This was an interesting chapter. I almost thought that Stephen was cheating on Mimi for a moment there but I'm glad that he wasn't. I love that couple.

I'm definitely interested of seeing what happens next. Great job!

Hello you. Its been a long time its Otohime... im bringing Tsukigoten out of its slumber. Plus i have a new story... not manga up called Taming fire... cant wait to see you around... your stuff looks neet ill be commenting later! see ya.

I've waited for a sequel for a while. I'm glad that you finally got it up and everything! I'll definitely be reading more of this!

It has been a long time Niki, too long I guess, do not even if you remember me or not but we were fictionpress friends that reviewed each other work all the time. I was here when you first started out and first posted Working for Affection. I haven't check out the revision yet but after reading this prologe, I do believe that you grown up as a person and as a writer... It been 3 years... and you are now a much better.

Moving on, I like this introduction, and there isn't that many mistakes as I could pick them up easily just by skimming and reading. So that's a plus for me. The only description that were left out is what ethnicity is Mimi and Riku? Are they asian or what? I like this and would love to see it continue soon...

Just what, the story "I Heart" has returned for the final time and revision are complete. I couldn't post the revised prelude since the computer i was working on it, fried on me. However, the original two episodes were on a different computer so I completed the revision, check them out.