Oh gosh... I really like the twist, because I have thought that "Okay, an angry girlfriend must have written this." Haha!

This is defintily different. nice job


XKristie MarieX

hey!
i do think that i voted for you in the WCC. at first i thought it was a letter from a person in a relationship with eric. and I LOVED the surprise ending. very nice and full of emotions that got across to the reader well.
~fatbird:)

Since I'm not sure whether or not the timing was correct, I've decided to err on the side of caution and review you again for the February PLWC. Disney thing didn't count.

I don't entirely grasp the purpose of all the ways in which Eric dictates this to himself, but that makes it no less funny. Humor aside, it's very telling of his psychology if he can dissect himself but still fall victim to the Freudian trap of projecting his vices. This paradox makes the piece, really.

Sex and the Lion King should never be used in the same sentence. Nuff said. XD

Seeing as I know people like this [and resemble it slightly], it was all the more entertaining. My only criticism is that the metaphors aren't clearly stated [how would he kill himself with a butcher knife?], and that could use a touch more elaboration, but other than that and its length, twas a fun read.

It's a bit depressing to think that Eric would commit suicide with a butcher knife if he decided to turn his own hair purple.

Interesting story. Strangely, I find it cute.

heh, i like it.

at first i was reading it and i assumed it was eric's girlfriend or some such (as i suppose you intended) so i thought, eh, this isn't that great, but that last word simply makes the story. i love it.

this isn't really important, but 'yours truly' or 'sincerely' instead of 'yous sincerely' would flow/sound better.

other than that, i like it =]